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January 14, 2011
By Cyann SILVER, Los Alamos, New Mexico
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"The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new lands but in seeing with new eyes." -Marcel Proust

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i think that i might carve my heart out today,
keep my feelings locked up somewhere far, far away.
i told you i loved you, and baby, its true,
but with your indecision, what more can i do?
you lift me up with your words and your kiss;
in those perfect moments, my heart is in bliss.
then what? the winds change? because too suddenly,
you're ripping me down into deep misery.
my heart's in your hands and it's being abused,
caressing it gently then beating it bruised.
and still i cry rivers when i think of you gone;
our dusk will set in before we even see dawn.

© Rebecca B., Santa Clara, CA

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tinabeana24 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 6:26 pm
tinabeana24 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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I love ur poem i feel that i can really relate too it!! :)
poetryguy said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 5:05 pm
Really like it, nice work
SilverSoul BRONZE said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 12:28 am
SilverSoul BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
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I love the last line. This is a very good poem.
Evanescence GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:41 pm
Evanescence GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Can any words live?
Live anymore than you have made them with this poem?
I don't think so.
I love It! Keep it up! Us poets gotta stick together!
Nelson SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:09 pm
Nelson SILVER, Amarillo, Texas
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I totally love it. I love how you put your emotions in it to make it deep and meaningful. I think you are a great writer and you should keep up the good work. :)
MissKayyADayAway said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 1:06 pm
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Very well done. (:
Jazzluv411 SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 7:49 am
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love love loveee this! i really like it, its nice and sad and short and sweet. good job:)