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Heartbroken

January 26, 2011
By Volleystar15 GOLD, Wauconda, Illinois
Volleystar15 GOLD, Wauconda, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You asked me what was wrong, i smiled and said NOTHING.<br /> Then i turned around and whispered EVERYTHING.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;When i see you smile and know that is not for me, that is when i miss you the most.&quot;


Met you last week
Love first sight
Always wanted to peek.
Said my chance was a might.
Then you Met my best friend
You guys started talking
All those texts you guys send
You sent me packing
Then again my chance came
We got together
I thought you felt the same
Then came bad weather
You fell for the friend
Left me behind
You try to mend
But I cannot find
That forgiveness you want
Us friends is what you ask
But our past is my haunt
I put on my mask
That happy face
You don’t realize
You I can not replace
All I can do is analyze
Where this all went wrong
That first kiss
But it is all gone
Im at a miss
You left me last night
Tears keep falling
Here I am heartbroken
Watching you be
With my best friend


The author's comments:
this is the story of how my boyfriend broke up with me for my best friend

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on Mar. 7 2011 at 4:41 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...&lt;/3&quot; -unknown.

Oh my GOSH.... u are amazing! Do u know me?! lol jk, cuz i can relate. Good job(:

on Feb. 12 2011 at 11:00 pm
OliviaShea GOLD, Lakewood, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind dont matter, and those who matter dont mind&quot; &quot;you know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams&quot;

i love this! it is so good! i can almost feel your emotions through your words, which is such an amazing thing when it comes to poetry! the one line i dont absolutely love is "i am at a miss". it flows well with the poem, but the words together dont completely make sense (to me anyways, but i could be wrong) maybe try "it is you i miss) it has the same number of syllables but gets across a clearer message(: just a suggestion. but even without any suggestions this is a great poem(: