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Pool of Lonliness

January 26, 2011
By Maddie26 GOLD, Baltimore, Maryland
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&quot;One small step for man, one giant leap for man kind&quot;<br /> ~Neil Armstrong<br /> &quot;Death is not the opposite of life but an innate part of it&quot;<br /> ~ Haruki Murakami

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I'm all alone
Drowning in a pool of lonliness
No one can see me
No one can hear me
When will I be saved
All I do is float
Farther away from the edge
I can't stay afloat forever
So please come and rescue me
I know that you're out there
I can't do it by myself
Climb out of this pool
I'm allowing the anger to build up
But no one will ever hear my cries
So what's the point of trying
I'm loosing hope
And one day
What if you see me drowning
Would you even choose to help
Or would you let my pain take over
And walk away in silence
You would be my last hope
To finally escape
But i hope that one day
you will finally notice the anger
Inside of me
And save me from this Pool of Lonliness

© Terrin C., Humboldt, IA

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emaa3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 4:43 am
emaa3 SILVER, Caversham, Other
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Everybodys special... That means no one is!

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This is good, where did you get your insperation? x