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The End of My World

January 30, 2011
By CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

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I live with your rejection
I loved you regardless
You swore you'd never hurt me
Yet you tore me apart
You told me that you loved me
But then you got bored
I was never enough
Though i gave you everything
You were my world but
I replaced you with my sun as you made my world tumble down

© Lola Z., North Platte, NE

The author's comments:
This was inspired when my long term boyfriend decided he didn't want me any more.
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CoolBreeze PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:20 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

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I find its more constructive to channel your emotions into a poem instead of revenge.
Mimi15 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 3:14 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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I completely understand this one! It really sucks when stuff like this happens, but you turned it into such an incredible poem!