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February 4, 2011
By cmaes GOLD, Minneapolis, Minnesota
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cmaes GOLD, Minneapolis, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
When you can't walk, you crawl. And when you can't crawl, you find someone to carry you.

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cut my hands on broken glass
trying to climb through your window
but i guess i took too long ‘cause
you’re off to 7-11 to pick up
milk or pop tarts or some other mundane crap
so it looks like i get to bleed slowly to death
on your floor.

sorry about the mess.

© Hannah S., Avondale, AZ

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kesher said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 3:30 am
kesher, Singapore, Other
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I love the ending, and the way you add the ordinary things in life into the poem, such as 7-11, really brings out the lack of special attention and the normacy of the situation XD
EmiiAngel GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:43 pm
EmiiAngel GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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"Everything's alright in the end. If it isn't, it's not the end."

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great poem ^^ i love how carefree the narrator sounds and the humerous twist at the end ^^ keep it up <33
WinterFairy PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:07 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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Haha. "Sorry about the mess." Luv it!
jasso GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 9:37 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

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like it a lot

hey

can you check out my poem ( in love dusk) plz

PassionHoldsMySoul BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 9:51 pm
PassionHoldsMySoul BRONZE, Maplewood, Minnesota
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<3

*hugs*

I understand.