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"A Visit"

February 6, 2011
By CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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&quot;I do not agree with what you have to say, but I&#039;ll defend to the death your right to say it.&quot;<br /> ~Voltaire

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A visit
Where the blue sky meets the wave
Where the grey clouds caress the grave
Where the dawn wakes the wren
I’ll be there to meet you then.

In the old stone cottage we’ll stay
And in the cool dewy grass we’ll lay
We’ll look up at the skies
And then wave our good-byes
As I end my long extended stay.

© Gabriella B., Montreal, WI

The author's comments:
As I sat in my English class, looking at the the blank notebook in front of me, I suddenly felt a rush of happiness, and I wrote down whatever came into my head. And out came this.
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CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:49 am
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I do not agree with what you have to say, but I&#039;ll defend to the death your right to say it.&quot;<br /> ~Voltaire

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Thanks!  This one I polished up a bit more than the others and I think that helped the flow.
MidnightWriter SILVER said...
on Mar. 8 2011 at 2:53 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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I like it. It flows so well. There is not a single line that I stumbled over.
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 5:18 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I do not agree with what you have to say, but I&#039;ll defend to the death your right to say it.&quot;<br /> ~Voltaire

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thank you!  I always write my best stuff in English or in the woods.  lol!
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 5:09 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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i like where you got your inspiration and how you wrote it down straight away, it really is a great poem :D
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 5:48 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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&quot;I do not agree with what you have to say, but I&#039;ll defend to the death your right to say it.&quot;<br /> ~Voltaire

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thank you Vidra

 

Vidra PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 5:34 pm
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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The imagery was wonderful in this poem. It gives off a very calm vibe. I like it. :)
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 6:32 am
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I do not agree with what you have to say, but I&#039;ll defend to the death your right to say it.&quot;<br /> ~Voltaire

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I really enjoyed writing this, and I hope you enjoy reading this!  This is my 4th Poetry submission on teenink!