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Forever
February 15, 2011
Your eyes
Forever innocent and pure
Your hands
Firm but forever gentle
Your hair
Silky and smooth
Your lips
So sweet and tasty
Oh how I love you
You are my everything
I will always be yours
Forever
© Lauren G., Pompton Plains, NJ
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soaring_creativity DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:39 pm
Thank you so much :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:36 pm
Among Glass Now I Walk is a really good one of hers, and if you want to read some more of mcnwritingsoul's work, just try copy and pasting her screen name into advanced search on Teenink.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:33 pm
So pretty and simple!!! I love love poems, especially the really simple ones, they manage to so beautifully reach the core of caring. <3
soaring_creativity DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:19 pm
It's about someone special ♥
lil reeses 1015 said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 9:07 am
love this poem!! who is it about...
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 11:50 am
short simple and to the point great job =)
Leah Plath BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 9:42 am
Love is a beautiful thing to write about, good work.
mcnwritingsoul SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:26 pm
Great image-implied!! luv it!! it had little power, though. i felt empty and still hungry after i read it. but very very good!! can someone pllzzzzz comment on my poetry!!!!! im desperate for honest feedback!!!
TheyCallMeSpanky SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:19 pm
This is really good.
KiTTYKAT said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:01 pm
i love your poem it so full of love and passion
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