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February 15, 2011
By soaring_creativity DIAMOND, Wooster, Ohio
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Your eyes
Forever innocent and pure
Your hands
Firm but forever gentle
Your hair
Silky and smooth
Your lips
So sweet and tasty
Oh how I love you
You are my everything
I will always be yours
Forever

© Lauren G., Pompton Plains, NJ

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malakai SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 10:47 pm
malakai SILVER, Washoe Valley, Nevada
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never give up even when there is no point

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very good its sweet
soaring_creativity DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:39 pm
soaring_creativity DIAMOND, Wooster, Ohio
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Thank you so much :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:36 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Among Glass Now I Walk is a really good one of hers, and if you want to read some more of mcnwritingsoul's work, just try copy and pasting her screen name into advanced search on Teenink.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:33 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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So pretty and simple!!! I love love poems, especially the really simple ones, they manage to so beautifully reach the core of caring. <3
soaring_creativity DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:19 pm
soaring_creativity DIAMOND, Wooster, Ohio
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It's about someone special ♥
lil reeses 1015 said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 9:07 am
love this poem!!  who is it about...
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 11:50 am
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
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short simple and to the point great job =)
Leah Plath BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2011 at 9:42 am
Leah Plath BRONZE, State Center, Iowa
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Love is a beautiful thing to write about, good work.
M.Kimmi BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:34 pm
M.Kimmi BRONZE, New York, New York
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sure, give me a title name
M.Kimmi BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:33 pm
M.Kimmi BRONZE, New York, New York
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So DIRECT AND FULL FO PASSION!!!!!! THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!! :D
mcnwritingsoul SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:26 pm
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Great image-implied!! luv it!! it had little power, though. i felt empty and still hungry after i read it. but very very good!! can someone pllzzzzz comment on my poetry!!!!! im desperate for honest feedback!!!
TheyCallMeSpanky SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:19 pm
TheyCallMeSpanky SILVER, Foutain Inn, South Carolina
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This is really good.
KiTTYKAT said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:01 pm
i love your poem it so full of love and passion