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Memory

February 12, 2011
By lovebeatles18 SILVER, Greenfield, Iowa
lovebeatles18 SILVER, Greenfield, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
i used to think that anyone doing anything weird was weird, now i know that it is the other people that call others weird are weird--- Paul McCartney


Tear jerked skies
Sleep deprived lullabies
The moons crest
A persons quest
The dogs howl
Night owl
Way and may
Come out to "play"
Pulling hair
Midnight air
Hear a whisper
Must have missed her
Bitten raw
Dead man's brawl
Eaten beaten
Shriek and cry
Last last kiss goodbye
Feel of lip
Dirty grip
Satisfaction?
Cold hard attraction?
Help me plea
Memory


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on Mar. 24 2011 at 6:57 pm
lovebeatles18 SILVER, Greenfield, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
i used to think that anyone doing anything weird was weird, now i know that it is the other people that call others weird are weird--- Paul McCartney

i guess teenink doesn't like quotation marks :(

on Mar. 23 2011 at 7:44 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t let what you can&#039;t do stop you from doing what you can do.<br /> John Wooden<br /> The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> Eleanor Roosevelt

I like the rhyming in this poem, it makes each line seem like it has a purpose; good word choice.  

Kind of confused about: "Come out to &quot;play&quot" typo?

But I like the raw emotion displayed, it's dramatic and right to the point. It's simple but perfect.

Claire=)