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Sand and Snow

February 15, 2011
By akell PLATINUM, Asheville, North Carolina
akell PLATINUM, Asheville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
There can be no society without poetry, but society can never be realized as poetry, it is never poetic. Sometimes the two terms seek to break apart. They cannot.<br /> -Octavio Paz


Limitless colors float by and flow,
tranquilizing hearts of hurt and woe.
I retreat to the terrific realm of my dreams
As I bask in my world of sand and snow.


The author's comments:
Where might a dream carry me?

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I<3violin said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 5:33 pm
Oh cool :) I was just asking cause at first it felt wierd that dreams was the only one that didn't rhyme. I actually kinda like that though cause it sort-of makes that line seem more climatic. I don't know... Beautiful poem :D

akell PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 4:50 pm
akell PLATINUM, Asheville, North Carolina
26 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
There can be no society without poetry, but society can never be realized as poetry, it is never poetic. Sometimes the two terms seek to break apart. They cannot.<br /> -Octavio Paz

It... just felt right. :)

I<3violin said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 4:22 pm
Cool! Interesting format. Is there a name for that or did you make it up?