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March 18, 2011
By aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
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aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
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"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

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Full with the depth of the ocean and cerulean of the sky
Far away in a world only you can see
Doors to a past you try so hard to hide
Radiating beautiful hope

© Raul R., Monte Vista, CO

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Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 7:14 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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Well thank you!:) im glad you like them!:)))) and im sure he was very happy that you did that for him!:) its a wonderful piece!:)<3
aspiringdreamer SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 7:39 pm
aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars.&quot;

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I wrote this poem for a boy in my class who was going through a really hard time.

Thanks so much for all the support! Your poems are amazing, as well. :)

Reader101 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:21 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

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What made you write this? Were you speaking of someone specific? I would love to know!:)<3