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March 21, 2011
By hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
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hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
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\"...because we all know...magic does not work through the phone.\" -Tomoko Katsu (my character)

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how many times...
have i seen you walk away?
how many times...
have i been left counting the days?
how many times...
will you make my soul break?
how many times...
will it take?
how many times...
will i give you a second chance?
how many times...
will we have a last dance?
how many times...
will i beg and plead?
how many times...
will you make my heart bleed?
how many times...
have you said 'i love you'?
and how many times...
was it really true?

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hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND said...
on May. 4 2011 at 5:24 pm
hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
78 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;...because we all know...magic does not work through the phone.\&quot; -Tomoko Katsu (my character)

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e point is to be repeditive
Debbie1 SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 8:15 pm
Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Luh-ving this poem! It's so touching, and so true! Great work
fio786 SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 10:49 pm
fio786 SILVER, Loves Park, Illinois
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i also agree

 

MusicSoul666 said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 5:58 pm
MusicSoul666, New Haven, Connecticut
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Lots Of Times ! 
perpetuallydancing GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:34 pm
perpetuallydancing GOLD, Prairie Village, Kansas
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&quot;If you don&#039;t have any shadows, you&#039;re not standing in the light.&quot;<br /> - Lady Gaga

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good, but try to allude a little more. the ending needs some work, but i like it! keep writing
perpetuallydancing GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:33 pm
perpetuallydancing GOLD, Prairie Village, Kansas
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i agree with this, unfortunately.
BeautifulSkye PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2011 at 11:38 am
BeautifulSkye PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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this was beautiful and i can personally relate

 

rubyrainstorm SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:17 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
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Wow, this is nice! I love how you used the ...'s. Beautiful poem, and keep on writing! If you have time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!!!! 8)
normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 5:54 pm
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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yea I especially loved the last four lines...
taylor rodriguez said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:27 pm
taylor rodriguez, New York, New York
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this is very deep and nice i likeit a lot
greyrferygbhfvsh said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:22 pm

Sorry dut you have to many

how many times sorry.

JustADreamer95 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 10:36 am
JustADreamer95 PLATINUM, Fairfield, Ohio
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This is a very beautiful poem, and I can relate so well to it. Keep up the good work.
normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 7:13 am
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Nice.

Liked your use of repetition. And it's very relatable. :)