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Excuse You, Sir.

April 2, 2011
By LovelyMess GOLD, Canton, Michigan
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"Those parts of thee that the world's eye doth view, Want nothing that the thought of hearts can mend" -Shakespeare's Sonnet 69

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Excuse you, sir
I'm not sure you've realized
You were a hero through her eyes.
Until you killed her and took her away.
She was my baby girl,
But that's faded to gray.

© Carlie C., Portland, OR

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Kai17 GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 6:54 pm
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Short, but awesome. :) What was it about?