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April 2, 2011
By asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

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Love is a funny thing
It can be a cruel game
Add -ed and it becomes what you were to me
Add -s and it is what
I still do to you
Add -r and it is the thing you were,
The thing that ended when we kissed
Farewell and good-bye
Love is funny sometimes
It delights us in messing with our minds

© Kelly Z., Niscayuna, NY

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 16 2014 at 9:00 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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very enjoyable to read. excellent word play in a very poetic and meaningful way.
KylieK GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 8:57 pm
KylieK GOLD, Mt. Washington, Kentucky
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Nice job!  The ending was fantastic!
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:50 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Love the play on words---it's true, love is a funny thing~
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:26 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Oh, now THIS is one that im gonna be thinking about for a little while. I absoluely love things like this, things that present a unique way of viewing the word. Great work, keep writing!
youthinkyoureallthat said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 12:10 pm
It was good!
Addae Williams BRONZE said...
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Omg i thought this poem was amazing. Short and to the point which brought out its majestic meaning. This poem shows how something so short and sweet, can be so profound in it's own way. :)
Alb1125 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:39 pm
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this poem was really creative and how the poet did the add-. the poet was really smart in identifying how the word love can mean many different things. Love this poems directness and gets straight to the point.
alymarie3 PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 10:26 am
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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that was really good how u had the add-...

goodjob

Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2011 at 2:31 pm
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
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that was great!! def going as one of my favorites!
dancergurl22 BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2011 at 12:46 pm
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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I LOVE THIS!!!!! <3 AWESOMENESS
PixieDoll2698 said...
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PixieDoll2698, Wood Dale, Illinois
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this is soo beautiful!
JustADreamer95 PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 10:42 am
JustADreamer95 PLATINUM, Fairfield, Ohio
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This is beautiful, oh my gosh wow is all I can say. I know a lot of us can relate me personally I can relate to it.
silentauthor SILVER said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:37 am
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It is sad its like the forum that I started Roosc gave me a chance now has my heart.
vampier BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2011 at 7:54 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
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that is sad i thank so.....!!!!