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Divorce MAG

April 7, 2008
By Anonymous

It downsizes problems
Except for mine
They say every name under the sun
For they aren’t rags
Raggedy Ann never got it this bad
It was all fine
Until
He boarded up the house and left
She cried and she cried
Their love was great
But
Their hate is worse
This isn’t fantasy
It’s what she’s felt.
Every other weekend
What a rush.
He loves us so.
But how do I know?
The red in my hair,
It’s a part of you.



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on Apr. 12 2012 at 10:43 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

I like the line: "Their hate is worse." Also the last four lines. For those who have felt the effects of divorce, they will relate to this piece.

CRISPYCRIS said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 8:19 pm
AS A FATHER IN ONE OF THOSE RELATIONSHIPS I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN. YOU ARE THE BOND BETWEEN YOUR VERY ORIGION. LOVE YOUR EMOTION, IT WILL GET BETTER. 

on Oct. 30 2010 at 7:33 pm
saramarie SILVER, Fairmount, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
hate is easy. love takes courage.<br /> the only reason in life is love.<br /> i don&#039;t hate you i just strongly dislike you.<br /> you&#039;re a great friend but if zombies chase us i&#039;m so tripping you.<br /> if i didn&#039;t have my friends, who would i be?

such heart breaking emotion but yet so beautiful.

on Oct. 24 2010 at 10:05 pm
TheRaven BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A prisoner of war is a man who tries to kill you, fails, and then asks you not to kill him.&quot; - Winston Churchill

"the red in my hair, it's a part of you." Exactly what I once said to my father. How absolutely strange.

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2009 at 1:46 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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i cant totally relate:) good stuff!

tweedle dee said...
on Feb. 24 2009 at 12:57 am
OMGOSH that was amazing! at first i thought i didnt like it but by the end i was in love with it!

on Feb. 15 2009 at 10:20 pm
Swtangel0391 BRONZE, Union, New Jersey
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wow thats strong emotion