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April 6, 2011
By Crossfire SILVER, Duncan, South Carolina
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Crossfire SILVER, Duncan, South Carolina
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"I want to be brave, and selfless, and smart, and kind, and honest. I'm still working on kind..." ~ Four A.K.A Tobias

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I once had a dream
That was full of fire
Full of all the hate in the world.

Corruption is everywhere
And fire follows in its wake
Governments are corrupt,
And fire razes them down.

Poverty is everywhere
And fire is always with them
People go hungry,
And fire burns them out.

Injustice is everywhere
And fire plays with it
People get killed,
And fire laughs in your face.

I once had a dream
That was full of fire
And fire never went away,
Fire stayed 'til the end of time.

© Elise S., Clarksville, MD

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I did have a dream, full of all the wrong in the world...
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Breanna_Valentine PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 26 2016 at 11:26 am
Breanna_Valentine PLATINUM, Sullivan, Ohio
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You are going to make it somewhere with this writing. Please keep following your dreams!!!
GreekGoddess BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2013 at 9:19 am
GreekGoddess BRONZE, Andover, Connecticut
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Hey this is really good, with great ideas behind it. I agree with Mariah, you need stronger words. Besides of that, this was really good :)
MariahPotter PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2013 at 10:28 am
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
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I love how you incorperated fire into your phrases about corruption and poverty and hate. That's interesting to combine the thought of troubles and hardships with fire and that's really original and creative. However, I think if you used words a little more menacing like, devastation, tyranny, melicious, torrment. That would highten emotions even more! But awesome work!
tr3bl3grrl SILVER said...
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I love it! Plz keep writing!