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Drowning Deep Under

April 23, 2011
By Karma BRONZE, Brielle, New Jersey
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Karma BRONZE, Brielle, New Jersey
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The swallows will always sing around the smoke stacks

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The feeling of drowning
Is slowly creeping
Father and father down
Into Darkness

Deaf to the sound of reason
Losing all feeling of you
Being blind to what is right in front of you
It’s all a part of drowning

When you drown
Nothing matters
You lose all sense
Of whom you really are inside

© Dan Z., Marblehead, MA

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I have know people who have drowned, but have always swam back to the surface before drowning too deep
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MollyMonster said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 4:44 pm
Nyet, I can't be british....EVERYBODYS RUSSIAN!
JenJenJ-Wow PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 7:17 pm
JenJenJ-Wow PLATINUM, Brielle, New Jersey
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Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned. They&#039;re only powerful when you&#039;ve got your back turned.<br /> -Eminem <br /> You&#039;ve got enemies? Good. That means you actually stood up for something in your life.<br /> -Eminem

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yo karma, i love it!  is it supposed to say farther and farther though, or r u now british? ;)