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May 22, 2011
By ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
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Her heart is covered in scars,
But they are nothing,
Nothing at all like,
The ones that cover her arms.

She hides herself in shame,
Letting the pain pile high,
She finds herself drowning,
In all the loss and gain.

She is letting go,
Letting go of this cruel world,
Leaving nothing to find,
Surely she will be going to Hell.

No one tries to stop her,
They just stand back and watch,
Watch the princess loss her crown,
Will this be the end of it all?

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ZeldaEve GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:33 am
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
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Thank you for pointing that out, I hadn't noticed it before you mentioned it.
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:26 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

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It's a great poem...

But in the last para u've written loss instead of lose...well that must be a typo...Other than it's a great piece...

ZeldaEve GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 11:57 am
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
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Thank you.
x-CaptainMonica-x BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:52 pm
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very moving
ZeldaEve GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 11:13 am
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
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Thank you for the feedback.
Finding-me PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 10:37 am
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you have a good grasp on poetry, and i like your style, it sounds a bit choppy tho, u could try to let it flow a bit more. :)