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"A World Beneath a World"

June 14, 2011
By PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

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The burdens of the entire world are uplifted
The moment u hit its surface
With waves wrestling for regretful dominancy
Beyond the translucent layer of transparency
Lay the wonders of the world
In a endless rhyme of silent notes playing its symphony
Recovering the wounded souls of its visitors…
…in a world beneath a world.

© Gabrielle C., Struthers, OH

The author's comments:
I was inspired by the beauty of the ocean, and how it carries a whole hidden world inside it, i hope u like it...
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