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secretly I'm A Monster

June 16, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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No one knows that
I'm secretly a monster
I keep it locked up,
deep inside myself
if I let it out
well then your good
as dead
I'm a monster, a beast
darkness is in my heart,
darkness rules my life
I am the darkness
I howl to the full moon
at night, I stalk the people
of the cities, towns and villages
for hunger of
blood, fear and I give no mercy
no one knows I'm secretly a monster...

© Kennedy C., Rockdale, TX

The author's comments:
It was based off of a novel I was tring to work on but It didn't turn out great...
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This article has 5 comments.

ShadowRealms said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:36 pm
No problem :)
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 7:33 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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I really do need confidence...thanks so much again and I might even try writing it as a novel again:). Thanks so much! And I'm sorry about replying late.
ShadowRealms said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 8:53 am
No problem! When I like something, I say so. You really need to have confidence in your work!
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 9:55 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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Thanks so much! I just had the idea in my head for a very long time and I just need to write it down. Thank you so much:D
ShadowRealms said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 6:17 pm
Don't sell yourself short, I think it turned out fine! This is very original and a good poem!