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Cycles Of Agony

June 22, 2011
By JenSweetheart BRONZE, Lawrence, Massachusetts
JenSweetheart BRONZE, Lawrence, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. - Eleanor Roosevelt


A ticking bomb ready to explode.
A balloon so filled it could burst.
An overwhelming feeling at the pit of my stomach.
Adrenaline rushing through my every vein
Dangerous thoughts cross my mind,
But I try not to listen.
Heavy breathing.
Silent tears.
I try to find my way,
But I'm walking around in circles
Repeating the cycles of my agony.
Physical pain no longer hurts,
But silently suffers.
My feelings are numb,
But my heart is breaking.
I try to have faith,
But how long til it's over.



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on Jan. 3 2012 at 7:28 pm
Ellabell PLATINUM, Columbia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have not yet begun to fight!&quot;<br /> John Paul Jones

This is great!

on Sep. 2 2011 at 12:49 pm
JenSweetheart BRONZE, Lawrence, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. - Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you for your comment. And yeah, I'll check some of your work out.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:08 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love<br /> Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance! <br /> If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

I love this poem, it is so good. so raw, and filled with emotion. "dangerous thoughts cross my mind but I try not to listen" amazing! those lines really stick out to me, I love them. keep writing!! check out some of my work and comment if you get a chance:)