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Who will?

June 23, 2011
By HazelRose____ SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
HazelRose____ SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
9 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is not evil. It tells you what your weakness is. And once you know your weakness, you can become stronger as well kinder." -Gildarts of Fairytail


Why are you abandoning me?
Who will pick me up when I’m down?
Who will make me laugh when you’re not around?
Who will take me out of my misery?
Who will make me realize that I’m not the only one in this world suffering?
Who will I tease?
Who will I have that strange bond with that only a brother and a sister have?
Who?
You are someone I definitely don’t want to lose
-love your little sister Jane <3


The author's comments:
My brother is trying to get in the service I’ve been to afraid to show him this because he would think I’m just his dorky little sister. I really don’t want him to go, I always think of the possibility of him dying and I don’t like it if he leaves I want him to see this and maybe get it published… he’s only eighteen he just graduated. This is how I will feel when he’s gone…

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on Jul. 7 2011 at 7:06 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Ok, gotcha.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 6:08 pm
HazelRose____ SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
9 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Fear is not evil. It tells you what your weakness is. And once you know your weakness, you can become stronger as well kinder.&quot; -Gildarts of Fairytail

No I had just a smiley at the end…   

on Jul. 7 2011 at 4:07 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Sometimes I think we just have too many young people in the service. I mean, I'm not saying it's the worst thing in the world. But I don't think people should be going into the service the secnd they turn eighteen. I think they should wait a few years, maybe go to college, then maybe think about joining the service.

 

I think you should show him this, as soon as you can. Because you never know, it could change his mind. He may think twice when he reads this about the fact that he'll be leaving you behind. Then again, you have to believe that if he does decide to go, that he will come back. I know he will. :) But if there's nothing you can do to make him change his mind, then the only thing you can do is show him this, tell him how you feel, and just always be there for him.

 

I really liked this piece. Very strong. Did you mean to have those few random characters at the end?