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eclipse

June 25, 2011
By Akz13 SILVER, Phoenix, Other
Akz13 SILVER, Phoenix, Other
9 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is but an adventure, the more you seek, the more surprises you find."


Shadow my thoughts
My feelings
My hatred
My love

Shadow them with
With something bigger
Something that has no comparison
No limits

Shadow me with you
Be my eclipse
Cast your shadow upon me
Cover me with your soul

Take away my sadness
Take away my pain
Control my desires
Slow my aggression

Although the shadow,
Which is dark, covers me
I only feel light
And free

I’m your moon
You’re my earth
Protect me from the sun
From our enemies

I will orbit around you forever
You will hold me with your force
Like this we shall live
Eternally


The author's comments:
a true love poem!

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Akz13 SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 3:29 pm
Akz13 SILVER, Phoenix, Other
9 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is but an adventure, the more you seek, the more surprises you find."

hey pls feel free to leave comments and offer constructive criticism. poetry is a great love of mine and i would love to perfect it. thanx...