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dreams of an anrcho-syndicalist

June 25, 2011
By human6 GOLD, Fasd, New Jersey
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If you cannot convince a fascist aquaint his head with the pavement-trotsky<br /> The bourgeoisie might blast and ruin its own world before it leaves the stage of history. We carry a new world, here, in our hearts. That world is growing this minute.&ldquo; durry

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Dreams of anarcho-syndicalist
Why?
Why do I work for the wealth of others
I work why do not choose how
I am a slave forced to work for money or starve
if I break they get a new one
Why?
Why do the few claim mastery over the many
I vote but those with green are in charge
I am a cog in deadly machine
i must fight to free my brothers and sisters
Why?
Do I fight war for the masters
I will not gain from its victory
The people lose all sense of self just to pleas the masters
I am anarchist for my freedom and for our freedom

© Chelsea C., Auburndale, FL

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human6 GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 6:08 pm
human6 GOLD, Fasd, New Jersey
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If you cannot convince a fascist aquaint his head with the pavement-trotsky<br /> The bourgeoisie might blast and ruin its own world before it leaves the stage of history. We carry a new world, here, in our hearts. That world is growing this minute.&ldquo; durry

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thx.............................
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I believe that this poem may go somewhere if you edit the grammatical errors. You need to break it down with either commas or periods to give the poem a definate rhythm you also need to check your capitilization in some areas. "Pleas" in the penultimate line should be please. I'm just wondering...shouldn't-

"Why?

Do I fight war for the masters

 

be

 

Why,

do I fight war for the masters?

You hadn't ased the actual question until the line after therfore the question mark should be there

 

On to what the poem says.

 

I agree with a lot of what you say here. (here being the key word XD) You use good metaphors and show a nice control over your words. All in all. Nice Job

 

-Will