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Forever Goodbye
July 1, 2011
Never ending pain
Fresh blood dripping from my wrist
Never thought I'd be in this game
To every cut is always a risk
You are a dream I cannot hold
It's not that simple I can not forgive
You left me standing there dead cold
This is something I must not relive
Crystal blue water so clear
Never thought this would happen to me
Shaking overcome with fear
If only someone could see
Looking over the edge
No need for a boat
Jump off the ledge
Everyone can float
The clock struck seven
When I flew into heaven.
© Alexa R., Marblehead , MA
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This article has 6 comments.
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 12:16 pm
Thank you so much. And I'm so sorry for your hurt and your loss. :(
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 2:28 pm
Thank you!
I really loved this poem, would have liked it if you had continued it a little more too! it was really good!! loved the raw begininng, "to every cut is always a risk" and how beautiful it flowed afterwards! check out some of my work and comment if you get a chance:)
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:52 pm
Thank you so much (:
mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 7:31 pm
It is fresh and clean and has so much emotion. Although you started out strong and raw the poem developed and it did so beautifully although i was left feeling that I wanted to know more through the progression. Although beautifully written. Mwah!
