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Drea(Awake)ming

July 7, 2011
By Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
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Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
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You have to be a little insane to live life extraordinary.

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It should just so happen
That she should be here tonight,
Of all the places I've gone
She arrived in my dream.

A special kind of dream,
One that twists and flows,
It is much like life
Is it life?

No, no, no,
It simply can not be.
Reality has never been so kind,
As to lend to me the beauty of one like her.

Have I reached the point,
Where my heart has found love,
Where dream and reality have
Swapped places?

Do my senses deceive me?
Am I to awake?
How will I ever know?
I won't

Or maybe
Just maybe
One kiss
From reality?

I hope

The author's comments:
I usually try and rhyme but I thought that this time I would sort of let my fingers wander across the keyboard, typing as they please. What I have left is an interesting poem, at least I find it interesting.
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Maxwell_SQ GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:47 am
Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
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Thank you everyone for the encouraging words. It really makes me feel appreciated when I hear that people are enjoying what I write.
A_Journey GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 4:35 pm
A_Journey GOLD, Tampa, Florida
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Really good. Even if it doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it still has that poetic feel around it. Sorry, can't find a better way to describe it :P

btw, can you check out my poem Hidden? Thanks!

Ally_H. GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 3:38 pm
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I really enjoyed this. I've never read any of your rhyming poems, but the whole "not rhyming" thing totally works for you.  Good job(:
AllysonMarie GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:27 pm
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I love your work!
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amazing. Look at some of my work?
Casper GOLD said...
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Wow, this is really good!(: keep up the good work(: