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Too Young

July 7, 2011
By Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You have to be a little insane to live life extraordinary.


As you fall asleep in my arms
Another tear rolls down my cheek
For these are the moments I live for
Time with you is all I seek

Your smile warms my heart
Your hugs make it melt
And your passionate kisses
Something better I've never felt

If you ever left me
I could die right on the spot
If I had to watch you go
I can't even stand the thought

'Too young to know of love'
That is what we've been told
But anyone who really knows
On this idea could never be sold

We both know true love
We feel it everyday
And I would trade the whole world
To always feel this way

To always hear you laugh
And always feel you touch
To always see your smile
Because I love you *this* much

I can not put in to words
Exactly how I feel
But I'll use my actions
And on one knee I'll kneel

And offer you a promise
To forever belong to you
Please take this ring and say these words
I do, I do, I do.

The author's comments:
It is pretty self explanatory...

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on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:14 pm
AlondraB SILVER, Montclair, California
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without rebellion you will have no compromise,and without compromise you will have no future. now all you need to do is to go out and speak your mind before you stand by and let weakness take over you.

Truly brilliant and beautiful..:) check out my work? Comment,rate..any ideas that would be great!

on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:48 am
Maxwell_SQ GOLD, Casa Grande, Arizona
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have to be a little insane to live life extraordinary.

Wow, in the mag? That would be really intense. Thank you for your kind words.

on Jul. 12 2011 at 1:25 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

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“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

This is brilliant. I love how you used young love as the topic. i totally agree with it! I agree ^^ It should be in the Mag. Great Job! (:

on Jul. 12 2011 at 12:34 am
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

wow. Exactly how i feel. Amazing. This should be in the magazine!

on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:16 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.<br /> ~Some random person on the Internet :P

This is really romantic and sweet. :) Very well written too. If you have time could you check out some of my work?