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I once knee

July 24, 2011
By smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
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"Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!" "If it is to be, it is up to me." "I am comfortable being uncomfortable!" -Steve Nash

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I knew it was love from the start
You had completely stolen my heart
You made me tingle with butterflies
This was the love that never dies
At least I thought that was the case
Now through my room I do pace
I made a huge mistake
Now every morning when I wake
I think of what we were
And picture you with a new her
I try to tell you how I feel
You but always say you can't deal
Trust is an issue yes I see
But still I want you and me
I know you're scared so am I
But like this I can't get by
Seeing you breaks my heart
I thought that we'd never part
You're giving up, but I'll still try
Until the day that my heart dies

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

The author's comments:
This was inspired by my first love after we had a bad break up and we probably won't ever be together again.
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smilemaker20 GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 7:18 pm
smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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&quot;Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!&quot; &quot;If it is to be, it is up to me.&quot; &quot;I am comfortable being uncomfortable!&quot; -Steve Nash

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Thanksss it took forever to figure out words!
smileyface96 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 4:27 pm
smileyface96 BRONZE, Tifton, Georgia
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&quot;To die would be an awfully big adventure&quot; -peter pan

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Really enjoyed reading this!
smilemaker20 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 2:48 pm
smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!&quot; &quot;If it is to be, it is up to me.&quot; &quot;I am comfortable being uncomfortable!&quot; -Steve Nash

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Well who do you think it is?
TaylorILY SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 2:27 pm
TaylorILY SILVER, Jackman, Maine
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there&#039;s no gravity up here.<br /> it&#039;s kind of hard to explain.<br /> every time i&#039;m holding you,<br /> it&#039;s like backwards rain.

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Welcome :) Is it about who I think its about??
smilemaker20 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 5:04 pm
smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!&quot; &quot;If it is to be, it is up to me.&quot; &quot;I am comfortable being uncomfortable!&quot; -Steve Nash

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Thanks! It took forever to write
TaylorILY SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 1:17 pm
TaylorILY SILVER, Jackman, Maine
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there&#039;s no gravity up here.<br /> it&#039;s kind of hard to explain.<br /> every time i&#039;m holding you,<br /> it&#039;s like backwards rain.

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I REALLY love thiss Keelyy<33