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July 16, 2011
By Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
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Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
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&quot;There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.&quot;<br /> -Ernest Hemingway

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The rain is reflecting my sorrow.
Oh, please, let it drown my soul.
And no, you wont reach me 'till 'marrow
When the sky will be all a glow

There are no more angels in heaven
They all left with such fright.
And no these aren't tears i am crying,
It's the rain coming down in the night.

Oh, please, don't save me from drowning.
I would very much like to be alone.
And please don't send for me tomorrow
For i will be six feet below.

© Chelsea C., Auburndale, FL

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paigey669 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 6:54 pm
paigey669 PLATINUM, Baldwinsville, New York
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this is so good<3 i love it, you really have a way with words.
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 11:23 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I simply don't know what to say... Utterly amazing... you have such a way with words.

Could you please read some of my poems? I'd appreciate any advice you can give.

MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:19 pm
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Anonymous01, this was a very touching piece. I don't think I could ever have written something like this. I think there are two kinds of poets out there. Those who think they can write poetry. And those who can. I believe that you belong in the latter category. Truly beautiful.