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Monster Monster

August 12, 2011
By GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
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GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
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&quot;....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I&#039;m dying are the best I&#039;ve ever had....&quot;<br /> -Tears of Fears-Mad World

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Yell and yell for all you want,
Ba***rd, you’re going to he**,

Beat and beat on my face from my head to my feet,
One day you will see what I can really be,

Lock me up and cut me down,
Make it so it just hurts to move or even turn around,

So I can not run, nor can I hide,
From the monster that you kept inside.

© Russell S., Bethesda, MD

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GabriellaRoars PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2012 at 10:58 am
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I&#039;m dying are the best I&#039;ve ever had....&quot;<br /> -Tears of Fears-Mad World

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Thanks so much
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2012 at 10:58 am
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I&#039;m dying are the best I&#039;ve ever had....&quot;<br /> -Tears of Fears-Mad World

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Thanks, It was pretty hard to write just because it was like looking back on bad memories.  But im glad i did
shmam7624 SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 9:00 pm
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
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We must become the change we want to see<br /> -Mahatma Gandhi

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Really love the ending. It definitely pulls everything together.
KityraAnderson PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:06 am
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
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The poem is amazing, it really sums up how some people feel about their abusive parents.

I know people who have been abused and it strikes a chord with me... :) Good poem.

Regs_the_Shorty GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:28 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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There are people who finish what they start and.....

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Very good you should consider doing my poetry contest you get one comment and rating on the article of your choice just for participating Deadline is August 21st!!!!!! :)