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Those Dead End Days MAG

August 16, 2011
By Lauren.H. GOLD, Lambertville, Michigan
Lauren.H. GOLD, Lambertville, Michigan
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Those days seemed much more radiant.
The Technicolor one-pieces
over skin so easily tanned;
toenails like rainbow fish scales,
flashing as bare feet danced through
grass tie-dyed with shades of green and burnt gold,
made slippery by hiccupping sprinklers;
the maize manes of dandelions speckled the lawn
like the baby blue robin eggs
fallen into dapples cast from the trees,
or the freckles that dotted our faces like galaxies.
Sapphire eyes beamed from under my sandy hair,
and saw the world with a saturation that is no longer there.



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Panirap SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:08 pm
Panirap SILVER, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
An old friend will help you move. A good friend will help you move a dead body. - Jim Hayes

i love the descriptions in this poem. VERY nicely written. id appreciate it if u could check out my stuff as well! id luv to hear what ud say :)

 


on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:38 pm
Ladywarrior123 SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s like a novel. With the end ripped out. The edge of a canon. With only one way down.&quot;<br /> -Rascal Flatts (Stand)

This was an amazing poem it was innocent yet so sad. Loved it. Your an awesome writer. would you read some of mine? Here for a Reason, Life is Never.

on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:11 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

P.S. read some of mine?

Asylum, Forever, That Girl, Dysfyunctional, Inseperable


on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:10 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it.&quot; -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)<br /> <br /> &quot;Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want.&quot; -b_gomez114

I love this poem! its sad in a .... like hearted way... i like the language and the flow is good... Thanks for a great read!:)