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Imaginary love

August 16, 2011
By HazelRose____ SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
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"Fear is not evil. It tells you what your weakness is. And once you know your weakness, you can become stronger as well kinder." -Gildarts of Fairytail

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When I awake in the morning your on my mind.

When I eat I imagine you sweeping me off my feet.

When I get ready to slumber you keep me up for hours.

When I finally drift off into the dream land you’re there reaching out for my hand.

I love you my darling I can’t wait to see you in person.

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HazelRose____ SILVER said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:55 pm
HazelRose____ SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
9 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Fear is not evil. It tells you what your weakness is. And once you know your weakness, you can become stronger as well kinder.&quot; -Gildarts of Fairytail

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aw well thanks ^.^ 
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 9:00 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Indeed, I love this poem as well.  I can relate to this not because I'm in love with someone, but that I count the seconds til I see my best friends again.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 8:39 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Reading the first four lines, my mind said to me tediously "another tiresome poem about perfect love and senseless adoration." Pleasant, but common. Then, I read that last line and- aha! There was the cleverness and the ending which gave depth to the beginning and the middle. Cleverly done, BlackRose, cleverly done.