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Warm Embrace

August 22, 2011
By Brandywrote PLATINUM, San Jose, California
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Brandywrote PLATINUM, San Jose, California
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&ldquo;maybe I can help&rdquo;<br /> <br /> &ldquo;Ah, yes, you want to be a writer don&rsquo;t you?&rdquo;<br /> <br /> &ldquo;You say that as if it&rsquo;s a bad thing&rdquo;<br /> <br /> &ldquo;No, no. just a lonely thing. Sometimes the world you create on the page seems more friendly than the lives in the world you actually live in.

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The stars feather across the sky
Ripples of birds and water flying high
Of sparkles in the sunset and moon
And as I sit here I’m dreaming of you.
Of warmth and comfort, your taste, your touch
All the memories bubbling up
A flood of emotions I can’t control
Blushing beauty, you live in my soul.
I’ve always held myself in chains
Dreams in dark laid in to die
In a Rapunzel tower far away I used to lie alone
Now you’ve climbed up threw all of my walls and broken all my chains
I’m trapped again
But in your warm embrace
We fit together perfectly.

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ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 6:20 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
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&quot;You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you&quot; Tyler Durden Fight Club

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I love this. It's so relatable. My only critique is that I think if you're going to rhyme, the whole poem should rhyme. Other than that it's really good.