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From the Heart. My Heart.

September 3, 2011
By FiREproof PLATINUM, Morrisville, North Carolina
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&quot;I&#039;m Like a little dog chasing cars, i wouldn&#039;t know what to do with one if i caught it&quot;--Joker-- <br /> &quot;You either die a Hero or live lonq enuff to watch yourself become thu Villan&quot;--Harvey Dent

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The piano plays in my heart, and the song doesn't change.
I get drunk off another cup of love, but it doesn't kill the pain.
So I stumble to the sink and pour it down the drain.
I hope when you see me, you realize what we had.
I look in the mirror, and realize I look like my past.
I heard that dreams can come true, I throw a penny in a wishing well.
Then I see you again, and wish you well.
Things happen in life that can't be explained.
Just because you get hurt, doesn't mean you should completely stop playing.
I close my eyes and try to open my heart.
Tears flood from everywhere, I guess that's a start.

© Brandon T., Manila, UT

The author's comments:
I wrote it free handed, i didn't make any changes to it. I wrote what was in my heart at the moment. Please comment & enjoy.
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Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 5:53 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Well written indeed. There are not a few clever lines, and they really dig deeply into the mind of the reader (at least, for me). The second line, the fifth line and the last two lines, I felt, were the most meaningful to me. I really liked this and enjoyed reading it, and was delighted to discover that you wrote it free handed and without changing it; that's really the best way to do it for this kind of poem.
RaindropsCatcher GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:10 am
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I get drunk off another cup of love, but it doesn't kill the pain. 
So I stumble to the sink and pour it down the drain

 

I thought the metaphor was bittersweet. I liked it. Good job.

Laurel15 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:04 pm
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Very good!!! I'm impressed that you did this in the heat of the moment!
CrystalfromAMS SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 4:36 pm
CrystalfromAMS SILVER, Noblesville, Indiana
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Awww! For some reason, I really liked this. :) I loved the few rhymes you had in there--it made it impacting. And the last line especially wrapped it up well. I can't believe you free-handed it! Well done!