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August 30, 2011
By IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
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It comes and goes like a storm,
Our body weakened by it's wrath,
No defence can stop it,
We just bare it out,
It ravages God's whisper,
And leaves you feeling cold,
But in the end it leaves some truth,
That will keep you warm.

Burn those shadows into dust and move on having learned.

© Courtney R., Great Falls, VA

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SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 17 2011 at 7:42 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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This is so beautiful! Wonderful word choice and imagery! The last line is pure brilliance! Great poem!
JustAnotherOwl SILVER said...
on Sep. 17 2011 at 7:28 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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&quot;See, we don&#039;t really care who you are;<br /> Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.<br /> So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer&#039;s disease,<br /> And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Sanctuary&quot;- Paradise Fears

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This is really wonderful! Love the word choice! :) Ha. I almost made the same mistake, about saying "defence" was spelled wrong, before I realized you're from Ireland :) Anyway, really great!
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:32 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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oh! okay, I'm sorry!!! haha. it's so cool how teen writers from all around the world use this site!
IrishWriter SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:15 pm
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
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Thanks everyone for all the comments, your feedback is amazing. Appreciate all the support!
IrishWriter SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:11 pm
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Thanks for the comment :D In Europe defence is spelt with a "c" though and I'm from Ireland just to clear that up :P
AMJaeh DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:45 pm
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very nice..liked the meaning
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:43 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Very good! I like the meaning, too. Defense is spelled like this though. Keep writing so that i can keep on reading! :)
Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 3:37 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Hey... I realy like this! I love the meaning of it! Great job on this, and I cant wait to read more of your work!
IrishWriter SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 12:17 pm
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Thanks for the comment :D
LiveLoveMusic SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 11:57 am
LiveLoveMusic SILVER, Torrington, Wyoming
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I like it :) it gave me chills, keep writing!
IrishWriter SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:34 am
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
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Thanks for the nice comment!
Damara...C GOLD said...
on Sep. 15 2011 at 11:49 am
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
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Great job, well written. I've read this one in the threads! :)