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like a hurricane

September 12, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe


everything happened so fast

you were here one minute and the next your gone

and my world is shattered like broken glass

the rain fell so hard and the wind knocked me down



your like a hurricane, leaving a trail,

leaving a persons life in shambles,

leaving people broken and sad

always coming back time and time again



You saw my tear stained face

you stood there and watched me cry

the you left was how you got a good laugh

the mess you made was funny to me but not to me



your like a hurricane, leaving a trail,

leaving a persons life in shambles,

leaving people broken and sad,

always coming back time and time again



Everytime i try to clean this mess of a life up

you strike again

everytime you are stronger and more powerful

than before, theres no point in trying anymore



your like a hurrican, leaving a trail,
leaving a persons life in shambles
leaving peopl broken and sad
always coming back time and time agian.



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on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:11 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank you :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:10 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Nice poem, singing quietly in my mind, I love it !

on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:08 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thankyou :)

eapoet BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:00 am
eapoet BRONZE, Dunkerton, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
close only counts in horseshoes and hand grenades.<br /> A short story is like a quick kiss in the dark from a stranger. (Stephen King)

cool poem. very well writien