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Cause when I close my eyes.....

September 11, 2011
By SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

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Gone through that strait
gone through the devil tide
where the feathers swirl round and the horses ride
looked for thee through the eternal eye
but when I closed my eyes
I saw you on my heart's other side.

Forever I played the heart's silly games
Nothing but the unbearable likeness
of thee to me tames
my eyes meet thine through hot air I am still fine
but then just this heart starts mayhem.

Wanna spend the rest of this life with thee
In thy sorrow there's mine, in your glee, there's my glee
Pretty damn this hearts running too wide
Cause babe when i close my eyes....
i see you on my heart's other side.

© Jacqueline S., Hanover, MA

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SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 10:16 pm
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
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sure! I would love to! :)
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:38 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Great work abhi ! Loved every bit of it .... Full of emotions and commitment ... P.s: I do think that you were inspired by someone , as i think it is devoted to someone you love ! XD
Fizza SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 10:49 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
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.very nice work. 3/5 stars from me. :)

 

would u like to check out some of my work? comment if u do. :)

SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:43 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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thanks yandah!
Yaya21 GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 7:09 am
Yaya21 GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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love and death what it is dont stop in fear, love yall ba, leave please, danger is reality, dont controll the feelin then y keep having it. hurt and pain is all part of life. life is too short to waste. believe what u believe in. love is a passion

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i really like this great work
SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 7:06 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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thanks tracey!
Traceyacey GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:44 am
Traceyacey GOLD, Eagleville, Pennsylvania
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Dont you ever let a soul in the world tell you you cant be exactly who you are. -lady Gaga<br /> Lady Gaga is so fn awesome she supports us emotionally everyday cause your on the right track baby you were born this way.

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very good the word wanna is a little weird but i besides that your use of words was great!
SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:56 am
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thanks a lot!
AlkaPradhan SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:52 am
AlkaPradhan SILVER, Lucknow, Other
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Don&#039;t let anyone become your everything because when that&#039;s lost you have nothing.....

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Awsome writing.....!!!

Its a relative wrok and could be related to real world