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Falling In
September 22, 2011
Falling in, with the falling wind.
Motionless, heavy raining bliss.
Angels fly fast, reminders of the past,
Learning to become one;
Steadfast, this will last.
Never forget;
All as one, this has become,
Our never ending love;
© Nick P., Apple Valley, MN
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Paramour13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:42 am
There isn't really a meaning, more of a habit. I started writing on my cell phone and used it to distinguish stanzas.. I just kept it.. It makes them different, I guess. If you know what I mean?
xxtennis13xx SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:03 pm
I love the length; you have a real talent to use such precise diction and really get the point across in a short poem. This really is awesome! I don't understand your endings with a semicolon though...there are a lot of grammar websites that are really specific about semicolon use, is you're unsure look it up! (I really hope that didn't sound mean. I understand some writers just do things like that sometimes, it just doesn't make sense to me with this poem.) (:
Paramour13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 11:18 am
Again, thank you very much!! :) I don't know if it was you that rated it, but if it was, I appreciate it!! :DD
Paramour13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 11:24 am
Thank you so much! :) I kind of felt that how short it was might have taken away from it :/
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