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I can see you

October 6, 2011
By the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows

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I can see you
I can see you in the halls
I can see all of you potentials
I can see you want to be free
But I can see you need the key
I can see how you feel
I can see you need help
I can see you hurt
I can see your haert needs mending
I can see that I can help you
I can see what you think
I can that you've run out of love
I can see you
I can see you in the halls
I can see all you can be
I can see all of your potentials
All you need to do is belive

© Shea K., Milford, CT

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the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 9:21 am
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows

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thank you

 

KellyAnne88 GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2011 at 5:32 pm
KellyAnne88 GOLD, Long Beach, New York
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&quot;Hey, I heard you were a wild one, all the more fun to persue.&quot;

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I love the use of "I can see" starting every line.