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Pain On My Window

October 6, 2011
By RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Pain, pain go away
Don't come back another day
Take the hurt, the sin, the shame
I don't want to play this game.

Dripping down my window slow
I'm now at my new all-time low
It only stops at God knows when
Please let me see the sun again

Pain, pain, go away
Don't come back another day
Take the one who tore apart
The many pieces of my heart

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

The author's comments:
this was a long time ago all I have to say is: Break up. a bad one lol
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Dreaa:D BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:08 am
Dreaa:D BRONZE, Del Rio, Texas
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Loved It! Great Job!
Acastillo GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 8:12 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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That was beautifully written, nice job!!!
Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:43 pm
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I agree with the last comment! This is very good! 5/5 stars!
Timekeeper DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 16 2011 at 8:13 pm
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A dark take on an old classic, impressive.