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October 3, 2011
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows


mother I never knew you
but I love you any ways
I never saw you
but I know I look like you
I never talked to you
but I know what you would say
I never lived with you
cause they took me away
from your hands
and boke all your plans
yuo never tought me
so I learned the hard way
I wish that I could be with you
were ever that maybe
you would tell me that you forgive me
for what I have done to you
then I would be free from this burden
I carry with me for enternity
what I did to make you hate me
that I don't know
it must have been really bad
to make you want to leave me
never to return
not the slitest glance back at me
if only you knew
just how much I love you
just how much I'm sorry
just how much I need you
maybe then you would take me back home with you
and hug me and kiss me and tell me
that no one will ever take me away again
and we will be together for ever


The author's comments:
this is the story behind what happened 13 years ago between me and my mother I haven't seen her since then

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on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:34 am
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows

OMG thanks that means alot to me

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:27 am
Paradise_Lost BRONZE, Mountville, Pennsylvania
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But paradise is locked and bolted; we must make a journey around the world to see if the back door has, perhaps, been left open.<br /> <br /> Swearing is the last refuge of the imaginitively bankrupt.

A few minor grammar and spelling issues, but deep and beautiful none the less.