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so alone

October 17, 2011
By wolfie69524 SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
wolfie69524 SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
credendo vides: by believing one sees


So Alone:
So alone…
I’m in a box…
I’m in a cage
of unbreakable medal
the feelings of hate
the feelings that break
they break me down
as I lift up
two forces that don’t stand up.
fire burning deep
as water makes it sweep
it rolls and washes
salty it tastes as I drowned
I fall down and down
is anyone there…
is anyone there to catch me,
save me,
love me,
hold me,
tell me…
are you there…




-lone wolf


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on Jan. 10 2012 at 9:28 am
wolfie69524 SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
credendo vides: by believing one sees

thanks... your were in the club meeting when i read it?

RachaelRoth said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 10:02 am

Intense. Very good. It sounded great when you read it.

-Bunny