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Evil Has Over Come

September 29, 2011
By 8xJustMe8x PLATINUM, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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8xJustMe8x PLATINUM, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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you&#039;re only as tall <br /> as your heart will let you be <br /> and you&#039;re only as small <br /> as the world will make you seem <br /> and when the going gets rough <br /> and you feel like you may fall <br /> just look on the bright side <br /> your roughly six feet tall

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He has poison in his pockets
the devil in his mind.
His bodies full of hate,
his eyes are deeply blind

© Tabatha B., Peoria, IL

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LT.Mckay BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 4:22 pm
LT.Mckay BRONZE, San Tan Valley, Arizona
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When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit and watch the world wonder how you did it.

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Love it. Short, catchy, rythemic, and the title just lures me in.
FreeAtLast GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:10 pm
FreeAtLast GOLD, Limerick, Maine
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#RebelStatus

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I really like this poem but i think it should be a bit longer
Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 6:46 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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I've got to agree, I like the work, but I feel like you should have added just a bit more onto it. A promising start, though, so keep it up! Check out my work sometime?
Natasha1994 SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 1:19 pm
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
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i think there is more to it it kinda feels empty but i like it i think it needs more
Blaker GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 7:34 am
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
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I really like this. It seems to me that it doesn't feel finished. Like there's something missing almost. But otherwise it was great, the first sentence really drew me in.