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Come out
October 17, 2011
In my head you're always there,
I walk around hoping to feel your stare.
But you're never there, you never have been.
Don't you care?
You're a mystery, you're a ghost. Come out, come out.
You're my dad, you are part of me.
How am i to be?
You're supposed to love me, and protect me from bad.
Its like a game of hide and Seek,
I have to search; i hope you don't cheat.
You're not here, You're not there.
Come out if you care.
© Sara C., New Port Richey, FL
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This article has 17 comments.
Devils.Angel GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 2:33 pm
I like how at the begining it feels likie your talking about your like ex-boy friend and then at the end your talking about your dad. i like how you care about him and then your dad really doesnt seem to care about you.
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 9:52 pm
I can sort of relate to it. Very deep and emotional. I, too, can feel the speaker's confusion. Great work :D
BlackPhoenix GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 3:25 pm
i like the braking rhyme sceme, when you hit the words that do rhyme it makes them ring in you head, quite moving
SpringMoon98 GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 3:03 pm
I like the rhymes and I think this is a nice poem
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 6:53 pm
I love this. I can really relate to it and I can feel the emotion you put into it. Great job.
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