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The Final Boom

November 4, 2011
By IPickTheTune SILVER, Greenville, Pennsylvania
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IPickTheTune SILVER, Greenville, Pennsylvania
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"Baby we can dance but I call the tune"

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Dark hat in a dark room
With him comes the doom
Even the barman drops his broom
"A drink" his loud voice does boom
Echoing throughout the saloon room
A young cowboy seals his doom
Buried with his sweeping broom
The voice the first, the gun the final boom

© Caroline C., Hingham, MA

The author's comments:
Manners where important, aarogant back-talkers not tolerated. ROOM-DOOM-BROOM-BOOM!
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