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Daddy I'm Sorry

November 8, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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Daddy I'm sorry I've messed up
I'm sorry I made mistakes
Maybe I am a screw up
Maybe my whole life is just a waste

Well Daddy I'm not the sweet and innocent
little you wish me to be
Its my life and the roads I have chosen to take
None of it was your fault

Daddy I'm sorry i've messed up
I'm sorry that I've made mistakes
Maybe I am a screw up
Maybe my whole life is just a waste

I live the life I choose not the one that is chosen for me
I will never be perfect
Daddy all I have to say is I'm sorry

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poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 6:15 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A girl doesn&#039;t need anyone who doesn&#039;t need her&quot; Marylin Monroe

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thank you :)
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 9:30 am
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Interesting poem, but I feel it would benefit from some punctuation. Also, there was an awkward line in it as well.

It's, "Sweet and innocent

little you wish me to be"

Maybe you meant, "Little girl"?

 

Either way, good poem.