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Is it wrong...?

November 1, 2011
By XxilybbyxX SILVER, Saginaw, Michigan
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XxilybbyxX SILVER, Saginaw, Michigan
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Sometimes we build up walls, not to keep people out; but to see who cares enough to break them down.

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Is it wrong that I want you to care?
Is it wrong I want you to tell me you love me?
Is it wrong that I hate that you're not here?
Is it wrong that I don't want you to put anyone above me?

Yes you make me happy!
And yes you are my world!
Yes I know you love me!
Around your finger I am twirled!

You've got me wrapped...
And yeah it's the truth...
My heart has been hacked...
I LOVE YOU!!!

I want you to spend time with me...
You can still hang with your boys...
But I'm trying to have the decency
to handle this with poise...

Please just give me a glimmer of hope...
Something to hold on to...
So that when you leave...
On my tears I won't choke...
Cause I'll never stop loving you...

© Louise T., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I don't like this as much as my other work, but it was on my mind... I guess i just had to get it out... Writing calms me down... I'm writing a book soon... Stay tuned... and please comment and rate..:)
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XxilybbyxX SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 8:15 pm
XxilybbyxX SILVER, Saginaw, Michigan
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Sometimes we build up walls, not to keep people out; but to see who cares enough to break them down.

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thanx so much i wasn't sure people would like it... :)

 

writerssoul said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 9:02 pm
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Love this! I can relate too, like the style btw