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I Really Miss you

November 3, 2011
By TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
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TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
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"I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that's the real me. I am a writer..." -TaylorBreanne

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We were so close,
You believed in me,
That’s what I miss the most,
You had my heart and the key.

You were so special,
So talented and cute,
I had never known anyone like you,
Thanks to you, I know love can be true.

That day you took me to the park,
Was the best night of my life,
Even though I’m scared of the dark,
With you I always felt safe.

You drew me a wonderful picture,
A beautiful scene,
That image took my breath away,
I couldn’t believe it, the image was me.

I loved you more than I can say,
I miss you even more,
It broke my heart when you went away,
You left me wanting more.

You still have my heart,
I trust you not to break it,
I’ll be waiting for our next trip to the park,
I’ll even wait for you in the dark,
So you can make more of your beautiful art.

I really miss you…

© Kim B., Marblehead, MA

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TaylorBreanne PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 8:23 pm
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that's the real me. I am a writer..." -TaylorBreanne

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Thank you!
LouieHan GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 4:58 pm
LouieHan GOLD, San Marino, California
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Xiao Dre, when life knocks you down, you can choose, whether or not, to get back up<br /> -Jackie Chan as Mr. Han

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This is really deep!
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 2:02 pm
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
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&quot;I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that&#039;s the real me. I am a writer...&quot; -TaylorBreanne

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Thank you! :)
poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:55 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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So simple and filled with sweet memory.
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:44 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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I love it! My favorite lines are "That image took my breath away,/ I couldn't believe it, the image was me." and the ending was simple, but wonderful. Great work!
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:32 pm
TaylorBreanne PLATINUM, Sandston, Virginia
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&quot;I write to escape reality. I write to be free. I write because I can lie or tell the truth. I write because I love it. I write because...that&#039;s the real me. I am a writer...&quot; -TaylorBreanne

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Thank you so much! :)
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:20 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
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&quot;You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you&quot; Tyler Durden Fight Club

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Aw this is so sweet but sad. I really like the imagry and descriptions. I love how the last stanza rhymes all the way through then you say "I really miss you" Great job.