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Flight of the Crow

November 9, 2011
By StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
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&#039;I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it&#039;-Mark Twain <br /> &#039;Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see &#039; -Stuie Larner

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Invisible in the night,
The crow circles the grey tower.
It's coat at sight,
Seems dark and evil, bitter and sour.
Yet inside is light,
Our souls carried, on the witching hour.

Buildings standing still,
Colourless and empty, filled with life.
Bustling movement at will,
Towards the sharp,dark blessed knife.

The Crows Flight Ended.
Our light never reaching where intended.

© Anna S., Glendowie, Auckland, New Zealand

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Shahiro PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 2:28 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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&quot;Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy.&quot; - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

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Intriguing (I think I spelled that wrong) I really liked it 5/5! Please check out my work, it would mean a lot!
StuieWLG SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:32 pm
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it&#039;-Mark Twain <br /> &#039;Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see &#039; -Stuie Larner

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sound man hahaha
jason said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:25 pm

it is a good poem ... its readable..not like half them ou there. :D.. ehhh 7 out of 10 for me. :P

 

StuieWLG SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:01 pm
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it&#039;-Mark Twain <br /> &#039;Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see &#039; -Stuie Larner

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thank you :) i'm glad you liked it :) 
AvaJay GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:49 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.<br /> ~ Tagore

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I'm speechless... That was beautiful. I'm reading it again... And again. 5 stars. Breathtaking. Love it.