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I'M HOLDING ON

November 11, 2011
By Yaya21 GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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Yaya21 GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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love and death what it is dont stop in fear, love yall ba, leave please, danger is reality, dont controll the feelin then y keep having it. hurt and pain is all part of life. life is too short to waste. believe what u believe in. love is a passion

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I'm feeling like you taking my love for granted

I feel like you taking my heart away.

I feel so unappreciated.

I feel like you don't understand me.

You don't do the things you use to do.

I feel like a fool.

But yet I'm still love you.

Sometime I feel like I need to realized that you already say your bye bye.

But for some reason I still hold on to you.

© Matt S., Taylorville, I

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This article has 2 comments.

yandah said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 1:29 pm
thank you RebeccaJoy ....
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:58 pm
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
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&quot;Sometimes it&#039;s kinda fun to do the impossible.&quot; -Walt Disney<br /> &quot;Go live your dream&quot;-Disney&#039;s Tangled

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great job with expression.