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deserving a second chance? All

November 27, 2011
By BriiKarri GOLD, Quispamsis, Other
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BriiKarri GOLD, Quispamsis, Other
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Our scars remind us of where we've been, they don't have to dictact where we're going

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Larger seems point the finger
downward

Decree circumstance held highest
Omniscient power lurks
Behind bureaucratic bustles
Senseless ignorance, question not
Force

Right to exhale, taken for justice
Wave, shake our feeble fist
Rapids engulf suffering
Unable in such a state
Self inflicted murder
Secret desire to admire annuity
Leased conditions accused borrowed time

Dare suggest, dare demand?
Chosen not
Let willing, fight freely
Amongst the best

© Andrea J., Marblehead, MA

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after what point do you decide someone can't be saved?
easy answer: you don't
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